Comments on: Enid from the Block http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/ssparshott/2009/10/enid-from-the-block/ This is the podcast station for TheNervousBreakdown.com, an online culture magazine featuring authors and artists from around the world. Mon, 22 Mar 2010 01:33:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 By: Steve Sparshott http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/ssparshott/2009/10/enid-from-the-block/#comment-35442 Steve Sparshott Tue, 24 Nov 2009 22:15:36 +0000 http://next.thenervousbreakdown.com/?p=19316#comment-35442 Original comments: Comment by Matt 2009-10-23 09:18:12 Good one, Steve. I have one of these crushes right now. There’s a girl here at my work, and everytime she passes by my desk, it can take the better part of an hour to get my focus back on what I’m doing. I now want to come to London just to visit your coffee shop/bicycle store. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-23 12:43:28 Oh no, a colleague crush! Very bad for your productivity. The bike shop, where I spend far too much time - and which isn’t really called Cranksters’ Paradise - is a smashing place: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/2921603915/in/set-72157603840073833/ Comment by Matt 2009-10-23 13:57:46 Damn, that looks like a neat place! Comment by Zara Potts 2009-10-23 09:56:39 Steve, I love your writing - it is so gentle and rich. Your story unfolds in such a lovely, true way. I have an image of the sweet shop lady in my head. I wonder if she matches your sweet shop lady? I bet she does, they are a breed the world over. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-23 12:45:06 Wow, thank you so much! I chatted with the sweet shop lady earlier today - yep, I bet you’re picturing her exactly. Comment by Lenore 2009-10-23 11:09:21 i love the categorization of crushes…i have many local crushes, and one music crush. but really, my heart belongs to my music crush. and i agree with zara, this was delightful. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-23 12:49:22 Of course, I have to ask - who’s the music crush? And thank you. I was afraid it might be a bit slight, just a snapshot, so I really appreciate these positive comments. Comment by D.R. Haney 2009-10-25 23:35:57 I think I know who the music crush is, Lenore. First letter “A”? Comment by Ducky 2009-10-23 12:40:27 Yes, I concur. Love this. Makes me miss New York. Now my crushes tend to have fur or feathers as I live out in the wild off a lake. There’s a Great Heron who flies onto one of my trees every afternoon. I always notice him when he’s taking off. Always leaving me, that one. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-23 12:51:18 I’d like to think the heron has a crush on a yellow rubber ducky, but he gets nervous and runs away. Comment by Ducky 2009-10-23 13:44:28 Oh, that’s cute. I will think of this next time I see him. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-23 15:34:17 I read recently that Enid Coleslaw is an anagram of Daniel Clowes (Ghost World’s author). And here’s the barbershop: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/3376680324/in/set-72157607192292200/ Comment by D.R. Haney 2009-10-25 23:37:39 It’s true about Enid Coleslaw/Daniel Clowes. I love Ghost World. It’s my favorite graphic novel. The movie couldn’t begin to touch it. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-26 08:09:13 I’ve loaned out every graphic novel I’ve bought (all four of them) and not one has come back. They’re the standard graphic-novels-for-people-who-don’t-read-graphic-novels like Jimmy Corrigan; Ghost World was the first, and it’s my favourite too. I like the film though, I think it works well as a variation on the book. Whatever happened to Thora Birch? How come Scarlett Yawnhansson became the megastar? Comment by D.R. Haney 2009-10-27 00:36:55 ‘Cause she’s hot. I’m afraid, for me, Thora Birch couldn’t begin to capture Enid. A haircut and a pair of glasses do not Enid make. The movie wasn’t bad, but the graphic novel… Comment by Tom Hansen 2009-10-23 19:47:41 That name Enid always reminds me of an insect. Probably because of its closeness to aphid. Is it possible to have a crush on an insect? Not the kind that involves a boot heel? Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-25 09:24:23 Aphid, katydid. Er, chrysalid…triffid? Not triffid. Comment by Will Entrekin 2009-10-24 06:49:57 Very nice writing, Steve. Love the descriptions; that whole shorthand-use-one-turn-of-phrase-and-you-just-know-the-character . . . you make it look rather easy. Rattletrap bike? Awesome. Also, I’d never heard of or seen anyone sit on their neoprene sleeve, but the moment I read that, I thought it was a really good idea. Makes me wish I had such a sleeve, and then went to coffee shops so I could use it that way. I’m kind of a hermit writer, though; in my room, door closed, headphones on, all that. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-25 09:31:31 Thanks! Rattletrap’s a pretty old-fashioned bit of Englandish. My muscles only have about 25% function (brain damage, road accident, 2003) plus I’m skinny, so I’m pretty much sitting on my skeleton. Every one of the five coffee shops on my street has wooden seats, so a bit of padding’s essential. Now the weather’s worsening I’ll be writing at home more. I find this almost insultingly simple internet blackout tool highly effective: http://macfreedom.com/ Comment by Mary Richert 2009-10-26 06:26:00 Lovely! I like Enid, too. Where’d she go? I love those vague passing romances. I have a little bit of a thing for the young guy at the starbucks down the road. I think he’s gay, actually, but he’s still adorable. I like knowing he’s there. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-26 09:20:14 I guess she just moved. When you say “I like knowing he’s there”, that’s what this piece was all about. And I expect Starbucks chap appreciates your attention; it’s nice to be liked. Comment by Dana 2009-10-26 09:11:59 I wanted to quote my favorite part, but realized I loved it all. So wonderfully evocative, and almost wistful.. but a happy twist. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-26 09:52:23 Well, thank you! It hadn’t occurred to me that it’s a bit sad, but yes, happy ending! Comment by Simon Smithson 2009-10-26 12:36:43 Hey! Hands off Garofalo, Sparshott! Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-26 12:55:39 I had to let her go: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/3549989270/ Is Kim Deal still up for grabs? Comment by Simon Smithson 2009-10-26 13:31:53 HA! Nice one. Kim Deal was actually my very first celebrity crush. Not including April O’Neill from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. Or, of course, Dr. Blight from Captain Planet. Until I saw that damn radioactive eye. Call me shallow, but I can’t have feelings for a woman with a giant petrochemical burn on her face who destroys the environment. It’s one or the other - not both. Comment by Erika Rae 2009-10-26 19:29:01 I felt the tension between you, Simon and Steve, when I read that line about Janeane. Funny. Steve - I like your style. Something very fluid, pictorial and literary about it. Comment by Steve Sparshott 2009-10-28 15:26:45 Thank you. I really appreciate that; I’m relatively new to writing. It’s always been a background thing, but it was forced to the fore a few years ago, so it’s great to get positive comments from people whose opinions are clearly worth something. Original comments:

Comment by Matt
2009-10-23 09:18:12

Good one, Steve.

I have one of these crushes right now. There’s a girl here at my work, and everytime she passes by my desk, it can take the better part of an hour to get my focus back on what I’m doing.

I now want to come to London just to visit your coffee shop/bicycle store.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-23 12:43:28

Oh no, a colleague crush! Very bad for your productivity. The bike shop, where I spend far too much time - and which isn’t really called Cranksters’ Paradise - is a smashing place: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/2921603915/in/set-72157603840073833/

Comment by Matt
2009-10-23 13:57:46

Damn, that looks like a neat place!

Comment by Zara Potts
2009-10-23 09:56:39

Steve,
I love your writing - it is so gentle and rich. Your story unfolds in such a lovely, true way.
I have an image of the sweet shop lady in my head. I wonder if she matches your sweet shop lady? I bet she does, they are a breed the world over.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-23 12:45:06

Wow, thank you so much! I chatted with the sweet shop lady earlier today - yep, I bet you’re picturing her exactly.

Comment by Lenore
2009-10-23 11:09:21

i love the categorization of crushes…i have many local crushes, and one music crush. but really, my heart belongs to my music crush.

and i agree with zara, this was delightful.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-23 12:49:22

Of course, I have to ask - who’s the music crush? And thank you. I was afraid it might be a bit slight, just a snapshot, so I really appreciate these positive comments.

Comment by D.R. Haney
2009-10-25 23:35:57

I think I know who the music crush is, Lenore. First letter “A”?

Comment by Ducky
2009-10-23 12:40:27

Yes, I concur. Love this. Makes me miss New York. Now my crushes tend to have fur or feathers as I live out in the wild off a lake. There’s a Great Heron who flies onto one of my trees every afternoon. I always notice him when he’s taking off. Always leaving me, that one.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-23 12:51:18

I’d like to think the heron has a crush on a yellow rubber ducky, but he gets nervous and runs away.

Comment by Ducky
2009-10-23 13:44:28

Oh, that’s cute. I will think of this next time I see him.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-23 15:34:17

I read recently that Enid Coleslaw is an anagram of Daniel Clowes (Ghost World’s author).

And here’s the barbershop: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/3376680324/in/set-72157607192292200/

Comment by D.R. Haney
2009-10-25 23:37:39

It’s true about Enid Coleslaw/Daniel Clowes. I love Ghost World. It’s my favorite graphic novel. The movie couldn’t begin to touch it.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-26 08:09:13

I’ve loaned out every graphic novel I’ve bought (all four of them) and not one has come back. They’re the standard graphic-novels-for-people-who-don’t-read-graphic-novels like Jimmy Corrigan; Ghost World was the first, and it’s my favourite too. I like the film though, I think it works well as a variation on the book. Whatever happened to Thora Birch? How come Scarlett Yawnhansson became the megastar?

Comment by D.R. Haney
2009-10-27 00:36:55

‘Cause she’s hot.

I’m afraid, for me, Thora Birch couldn’t begin to capture Enid. A haircut and a pair of glasses do not Enid make. The movie wasn’t bad, but the graphic novel…

Comment by Tom Hansen
2009-10-23 19:47:41

That name Enid always reminds me of an insect. Probably because of its closeness to aphid. Is it possible to have a crush on an insect? Not the kind that involves a boot heel?

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-25 09:24:23

Aphid, katydid. Er, chrysalid…triffid? Not triffid.

Comment by Will Entrekin
2009-10-24 06:49:57

Very nice writing, Steve. Love the descriptions; that whole shorthand-use-one-turn-of-phrase-and-you-just-know-the-character . . . you make it look rather easy. Rattletrap bike? Awesome.

Also, I’d never heard of or seen anyone sit on their neoprene sleeve, but the moment I read that, I thought it was a really good idea. Makes me wish I had such a sleeve, and then went to coffee shops so I could use it that way. I’m kind of a hermit writer, though; in my room, door closed, headphones on, all that.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-25 09:31:31

Thanks! Rattletrap’s a pretty old-fashioned bit of Englandish.

My muscles only have about 25% function (brain damage, road accident, 2003) plus I’m skinny, so I’m pretty much sitting on my skeleton. Every one of the five coffee shops on my street has wooden seats, so a bit of padding’s essential.

Now the weather’s worsening I’ll be writing at home more. I find this almost insultingly simple internet blackout tool highly effective: http://macfreedom.com/

Comment by Mary Richert
2009-10-26 06:26:00

Lovely! I like Enid, too. Where’d she go? I love those vague passing romances. I have a little bit of a thing for the young guy at the starbucks down the road. I think he’s gay, actually, but he’s still adorable. I like knowing he’s there.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-26 09:20:14

I guess she just moved. When you say “I like knowing he’s there”, that’s what this piece was all about. And I expect Starbucks chap appreciates your attention; it’s nice to be liked.

Comment by Dana
2009-10-26 09:11:59

I wanted to quote my favorite part, but realized I loved it all. So wonderfully evocative, and almost wistful.. but a happy twist.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-26 09:52:23

Well, thank you! It hadn’t occurred to me that it’s a bit sad, but yes, happy ending!

Comment by Simon Smithson
2009-10-26 12:36:43

Hey! Hands off Garofalo, Sparshott!

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-26 12:55:39

I had to let her go: http://www.flickr.com/photos/frazernash/3549989270/
Is Kim Deal still up for grabs?

Comment by Simon Smithson
2009-10-26 13:31:53

HA! Nice one.

Kim Deal was actually my very first celebrity crush. Not including April O’Neill from Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. Or, of course, Dr. Blight from Captain Planet. Until I saw that damn radioactive eye. Call me shallow, but I can’t have feelings for a woman with a giant petrochemical burn on her face who destroys the environment. It’s one or the other - not both.

Comment by Erika Rae
2009-10-26 19:29:01

I felt the tension between you, Simon and Steve, when I read that line about Janeane. Funny.

Steve - I like your style. Something very fluid, pictorial and literary about it.

Comment by Steve Sparshott
2009-10-28 15:26:45

Thank you. I really appreciate that; I’m relatively new to writing. It’s always been a background thing, but it was forced to the fore a few years ago, so it’s great to get positive comments from people whose opinions are clearly worth something.

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