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		<title>By: LitPark</title>
		<link>http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/shenderson/2009/11/litpark-the-evolution-of-the-book/#comment-38802</link>
		<dc:creator>LitPark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 18:40:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lori, I find that, too. When I'm actually doing the work--plotting the book, walking in the character's shoes, playing with a line until it has just the right rhythm, I'm doing okay. When I start to measure myself against the success of others or spend too much time thinking about what I don't have but desperately want, I'm a mess. So today, I'm writing...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lori, I find that, too. When I&#8217;m actually doing the work&#8211;plotting the book, walking in the character&#8217;s shoes, playing with a line until it has just the right rhythm, I&#8217;m doing okay. When I start to measure myself against the success of others or spend too much time thinking about what I don&#8217;t have but desperately want, I&#8217;m a mess. So today, I&#8217;m writing&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Lori Oliva</title>
		<link>http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/shenderson/2009/11/litpark-the-evolution-of-the-book/#comment-38756</link>
		<dc:creator>Lori Oliva</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2009 15:34:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Susan, for addressing this topic. It’s one that usually stays buried in my subconscious, until I have one of those days where I can’t write, and I can’t read…then the self-doubt comes in, followed by the demons that are just waiting to raise their ugly heads, to tell me how much time and energy I’ve wasted to share my singular perspective with the world.  Then, I hit my Twitter page and read the latest from a writer whose style I really don’t understand or prefer announcing his latest achievement in 140 characters ALL CAPPED. It’s disheartening, but it’s a flaw I’m really working on to overcome. I know it will happen, and it’s not the waiting that’s so bad. It’s the time when I’m unproductive that seems to feed the despair.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Susan, for addressing this topic. It’s one that usually stays buried in my subconscious, until I have one of those days where I can’t write, and I can’t read…then the self-doubt comes in, followed by the demons that are just waiting to raise their ugly heads, to tell me how much time and energy I’ve wasted to share my singular perspective with the world.  Then, I hit my Twitter page and read the latest from a writer whose style I really don’t understand or prefer announcing his latest achievement in 140 characters ALL CAPPED. It’s disheartening, but it’s a flaw I’m really working on to overcome. I know it will happen, and it’s not the waiting that’s so bad. It’s the time when I’m unproductive that seems to feed the despair.</p>
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		<title>By: Susan Henderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Henderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Nov 2009 14:35:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Know what you mean about looking back at a manuscript you once thought was ready! Tony, is your book out yet?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Know what you mean about looking back at a manuscript you once thought was ready! Tony, is your book out yet?</p>
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		<title>By: Tony DuShane</title>
		<link>http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/shenderson/2009/11/litpark-the-evolution-of-the-book/#comment-35315</link>
		<dc:creator>Tony DuShane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Nov 2009 04:10:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>on those rejections, how often did you get feedback?

it turned out a good chunk of my rejections gave me detailed feedback as to the whys before soft skull finally picked it up....but i did rewrites, some based on the feedback of rejection letters.

the consensus of three rejections were to lose the first 60 pages...which were very funny, felt like cutting off a limb, but they were absolutely right. those pages weren't pushing the story forward and gave too much back story on a secondary character.

stuff i can reuse, but damn, every time i look at the final work, it wasn't ready when i was submitting elsewhere.

and the big houses had a hard time figuring out the marketing aspect of a book about a jehovah's witness kid.....no bookscan numbers to give them confidence.

btw, great piece susan.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>on those rejections, how often did you get feedback?</p>
<p>it turned out a good chunk of my rejections gave me detailed feedback as to the whys before soft skull finally picked it up&#8230;.but i did rewrites, some based on the feedback of rejection letters.</p>
<p>the consensus of three rejections were to lose the first 60 pages&#8230;which were very funny, felt like cutting off a limb, but they were absolutely right. those pages weren&#8217;t pushing the story forward and gave too much back story on a secondary character.</p>
<p>stuff i can reuse, but damn, every time i look at the final work, it wasn&#8217;t ready when i was submitting elsewhere.</p>
<p>and the big houses had a hard time figuring out the marketing aspect of a book about a jehovah&#8217;s witness kid&#8230;..no bookscan numbers to give them confidence.</p>
<p>btw, great piece susan.</p>
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		<title>By: Susan Henderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Henderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 12:59:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Me, too, about being impossible to live with if I don't write. I tried to quit the habit a few times based on logical thinking (well, this isn't making any money, this is too hard, etc) and that other force, whatever it is that isn't logical, always brought me back.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Me, too, about being impossible to live with if I don&#8217;t write. I tried to quit the habit a few times based on logical thinking (well, this isn&#8217;t making any money, this is too hard, etc) and that other force, whatever it is that isn&#8217;t logical, always brought me back.</p>
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		<title>By: jonathan evison</title>
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		<dc:creator>jonathan evison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2009 04:15:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>.  . . how true all of this rings to me . . . i logged over 500 rejections, physically buried four novels, and dug a lot of ditches before i broke through . . .and i'd do it all over again, even if i knew there was no contract at the other end, because writing novels IS living for me . . . i would've destroyed myself one way or another long ago if hadn't been for writing . . .and while i'm crossing my fingers that my good fortune continues in the marketplace (because the truth is, this novelist put ALL of his eggs in one basket and has few marketable job skills), it is without a doubt a subordinate concern to doing the work itself. . .that's the real reward . . . if i don't write for three days, i'm impossible to live with . . .</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>.  . . how true all of this rings to me . . . i logged over 500 rejections, physically buried four novels, and dug a lot of ditches before i broke through . . .and i&#8217;d do it all over again, even if i knew there was no contract at the other end, because writing novels IS living for me . . . i would&#8217;ve destroyed myself one way or another long ago if hadn&#8217;t been for writing . . .and while i&#8217;m crossing my fingers that my good fortune continues in the marketplace (because the truth is, this novelist put ALL of his eggs in one basket and has few marketable job skills), it is without a doubt a subordinate concern to doing the work itself. . .that&#8217;s the real reward . . . if i don&#8217;t write for three days, i&#8217;m impossible to live with . . .</p>
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		<title>By: Susan Henderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Henderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 19:41:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Will, and thanks!

I agree about the friends - there's something about creative, strong-willed people who have been humbled and humbled and humbled again that appeal to me so much. Here's to your publishing contract!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Will, and thanks!</p>
<p>I agree about the friends - there&#8217;s something about creative, strong-willed people who have been humbled and humbled and humbled again that appeal to me so much. Here&#8217;s to your publishing contract!</p>
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		<title>By: Will Entrekin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Will Entrekin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 17:05:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>First, welcome.  You had me at Gaiman.

I'm the writer still working toward the publishing contract while watching other people get theirs, but I think it works way beyond the writer circle now that the Internet exists.  I'll admit some disgruntled bitterness the past few days while being inundated with media snippets of Sarah Palin on her book tour, interviewing with Oprah and Barbara Walters; how does this woman have a book out?  Same with Tila Tequila.

But then I think that the Internet-beyond-the-writer's-group is also what saves me from that bitterness, too.  Because this is how I met guys like Greg and Jonathan, and Richard and Brad, and how can one begrudge writers who deserve it and put in the work?  Living breathing examples that it's tough but not impossible, and Palin and Tequila aren't the only ones who can do it.

It's generally more difficult to find success through talent rather than celebrity, but that success is probably more fulfilling.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>First, welcome.  You had me at Gaiman.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m the writer still working toward the publishing contract while watching other people get theirs, but I think it works way beyond the writer circle now that the Internet exists.  I&#8217;ll admit some disgruntled bitterness the past few days while being inundated with media snippets of Sarah Palin on her book tour, interviewing with Oprah and Barbara Walters; how does this woman have a book out?  Same with Tila Tequila.</p>
<p>But then I think that the Internet-beyond-the-writer&#8217;s-group is also what saves me from that bitterness, too.  Because this is how I met guys like Greg and Jonathan, and Richard and Brad, and how can one begrudge writers who deserve it and put in the work?  Living breathing examples that it&#8217;s tough but not impossible, and Palin and Tequila aren&#8217;t the only ones who can do it.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s generally more difficult to find success through talent rather than celebrity, but that success is probably more fulfilling.</p>
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		<title>By: Susan Henderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Susan Henderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 17:17:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow, that is so nice! Thank you.

I saw an article in Michael Cader's Publisher's Marketplace today that is a big wake up call to those of us who write literary fiction. I'll paste the article here so you can check out these numbers:

How the NBA Nominees Have Fared
With the National Book Award winners due to be announced on Wednesday evening, we took a look at what the marketplace has had to say so far about the fiction nominees. Unfortunately, the NBA nominations themselves traditionally do not have a lot of impact on sales.

In both total sales to date as well as sales since the nominations were announced, Colum McCann's LET THE GREAT WORLD SPIN is the clear stand-out. With just under 2,400 copies sold in the last three full weeks as recorded by Nielsen BookScan, he has outsold the rest of the field combined (the other four titles have comprised under 1,900 copies in sales in all.) Running a distance second is the little-known AMERICAN SALVAGE by Bonnie Jo Campbell, published by Wayne State University Press, with a little over 600 copies sold over the past three weeks. (For comparison's sake, bear in mind that Peter Mathiessen's Shadow Country, last year's fiction winner, had sold approximately 6,000 copies in hardcover prior to winning the award.)

Here are the approximate sales to date of the five nominees via outlets tracked by Nielsen BookScan:

LET THE GREAT WORLD SPIN, by Colum McCann            17,200 copies
LARK AND TERMITE, by Jayne Anne Phillips            15,250 copies
IN OTHER ROOMS, OTHER WONDERS, by Daniyal Mueenuddin    8,750 copies
FAR NORTH, by Marcel Theroux                         1,275 copies
AMERICAN SALVAGE, by Bonnie Jo Campbell                 1,100 copies</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, that is so nice! Thank you.</p>
<p>I saw an article in Michael Cader&#8217;s Publisher&#8217;s Marketplace today that is a big wake up call to those of us who write literary fiction. I&#8217;ll paste the article here so you can check out these numbers:</p>
<p>How the NBA Nominees Have Fared<br />
With the National Book Award winners due to be announced on Wednesday evening, we took a look at what the marketplace has had to say so far about the fiction nominees. Unfortunately, the NBA nominations themselves traditionally do not have a lot of impact on sales.</p>
<p>In both total sales to date as well as sales since the nominations were announced, Colum McCann&#8217;s LET THE GREAT WORLD SPIN is the clear stand-out. With just under 2,400 copies sold in the last three full weeks as recorded by Nielsen BookScan, he has outsold the rest of the field combined (the other four titles have comprised under 1,900 copies in sales in all.) Running a distance second is the little-known AMERICAN SALVAGE by Bonnie Jo Campbell, published by Wayne State University Press, with a little over 600 copies sold over the past three weeks. (For comparison&#8217;s sake, bear in mind that Peter Mathiessen&#8217;s Shadow Country, last year&#8217;s fiction winner, had sold approximately 6,000 copies in hardcover prior to winning the award.)</p>
<p>Here are the approximate sales to date of the five nominees via outlets tracked by Nielsen BookScan:</p>
<p>LET THE GREAT WORLD SPIN, by Colum McCann            17,200 copies<br />
LARK AND TERMITE, by Jayne Anne Phillips            15,250 copies<br />
IN OTHER ROOMS, OTHER WONDERS, by Daniyal Mueenuddin    8,750 copies<br />
FAR NORTH, by Marcel Theroux                         1,275 copies<br />
AMERICAN SALVAGE, by Bonnie Jo Campbell                 1,100 copies</p>
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		<title>By: Robin Antalek</title>
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		<dc:creator>Robin Antalek</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 16:17:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have to join the others here and say I have long been in awe of the good you have made out of LitPark - a genius idea that actually brought all sorts of people with a love for the written word together - in an even playing field.  You are genuine and generous and LitPark reflects that.
  I'd have to agree with Greg when he said that the book contract was like a lovely door at the end of a very long( in my case 15 plus years before "the call") hallway.... that in turn leads to another long, albeit slightly different hallway. I've found it to be so true, slightly disorienting, maddening, a bit like Alice falling down the rabbit hole, but oh so wonderful, surprising and delightful.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have to join the others here and say I have long been in awe of the good you have made out of LitPark - a genius idea that actually brought all sorts of people with a love for the written word together - in an even playing field.  You are genuine and generous and LitPark reflects that.<br />
  I&#8217;d have to agree with Greg when he said that the book contract was like a lovely door at the end of a very long( in my case 15 plus years before &#8220;the call&#8221;) hallway&#8230;. that in turn leads to another long, albeit slightly different hallway. I&#8217;ve found it to be so true, slightly disorienting, maddening, a bit like Alice falling down the rabbit hole, but oh so wonderful, surprising and delightful.</p>
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		<title>By: LitPark</title>
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		<dc:creator>LitPark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 13:48:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Honestly, sometimes I think it's a game of endurance. The ones who stay in the game stay because they have something to say and they have the will to get it right and find their audience. And what looks like failure and setbacks may very well turn out to be the things that put you on the path that leads to where you want to go. Not easy, though. Writers and artists are made of different stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Honestly, sometimes I think it&#8217;s a game of endurance. The ones who stay in the game stay because they have something to say and they have the will to get it right and find their audience. And what looks like failure and setbacks may very well turn out to be the things that put you on the path that leads to where you want to go. Not easy, though. Writers and artists are made of different stuff.</p>
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		<title>By: Ric Marion</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ric Marion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 13:43:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Out here in the wilderness, trying to use blogs and other ways to find a writer's group - the local one is nice, but most members haven't even begun the process yet.  It is humbling to finish reading a piece and have them all go, "wow", but isn't particularly helpful. 

And, yes, I am jealous of other's success, but know I'm going to make it.  Just keep moving toward the future, the Holy Grail, the End.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Out here in the wilderness, trying to use blogs and other ways to find a writer&#8217;s group - the local one is nice, but most members haven&#8217;t even begun the process yet.  It is humbling to finish reading a piece and have them all go, &#8220;wow&#8221;, but isn&#8217;t particularly helpful. </p>
<p>And, yes, I am jealous of other&#8217;s success, but know I&#8217;m going to make it.  Just keep moving toward the future, the Holy Grail, the End.</p>
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		<title>By: LitPark</title>
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		<dc:creator>LitPark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 13:43:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That's the sweetest, Jess. I'm so looking forward to reading a whole book of your hermit crab stories.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s the sweetest, Jess. I&#8217;m so looking forward to reading a whole book of your hermit crab stories.</p>
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		<title>By: Billy Bones</title>
		<link>http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/shenderson/2009/11/litpark-the-evolution-of-the-book/#comment-33826</link>
		<dc:creator>Billy Bones</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 13:29:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>(Me, too!)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>(Me, too!)</p>
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		<title>By: Jessica Keener</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jessica Keener</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 13:10:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Susan,

Great to see you here.  

I'm still celebrating your novel contract--quietly, as it gives me hope for myself.  As you know, I'm a fellow traveler walking this long road you've described so well.  As for Ruby Cup, I can't wait to read all of it.  Your first chapter was astonishing and stunning. 

Wonderful post as always. 

Jessica</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Susan,</p>
<p>Great to see you here.  </p>
<p>I&#8217;m still celebrating your novel contract&#8211;quietly, as it gives me hope for myself.  As you know, I&#8217;m a fellow traveler walking this long road you&#8217;ve described so well.  As for Ruby Cup, I can&#8217;t wait to read all of it.  Your first chapter was astonishing and stunning. </p>
<p>Wonderful post as always. </p>
<p>Jessica</p>
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